Mousey's attempts at Haichoo

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Mousey's attempts at Haichoo

Post by mousey1 » March 31st, 2005, 8:41 pm

Follow that train of thought
Choo choo on the words
Till the end of the line



Hai choo Hai choo
God bless you
Hai choo



I once was so serious
That I became a fool
And laughed and laughed and laughed
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by stilltrucking » April 1st, 2005, 5:29 am

"time defragments the soul"
It takes time
Waiting for data to appear
disambiguous




gezz
zunt
hight

I liked them a lot 8)








musings on haiku
hijacked SooZen Post
I once used an emoticon :D with arcadia because he praised one of my ku's. that has bothered me
a insincere emoticon. I really wasn't that happy about it.
just a monentary relief like a sneeze.
there is more happiness in reading them then writting them
so it seems to me.

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Post by mousey1 » April 2nd, 2005, 12:58 am

musings on haiku
heh, in my case, mousings on haichoo :)

I'm no haikuist, as you may note, but yes I had fun. Just playing about abit. Nice you liked.

I almost used gazuntight (or however you spell it) instead of God Bless You, it was a literary call :shock: :lol:

My views and musings, or mousings as the case may be on emoticons is that one can never abuse, misuse or overuse them, they are pictures worth a thousand words..case in point....
:P

and yes, your post made me (insert smiley emoticon here) :)

Thanks for readin'
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by stilltrucking » April 2nd, 2005, 8:47 pm

I don't have a clue about it comrade, if it had not been for SooZen I wouldn't even try. The other day I used this s board to vent my anger, I am not proud of that. :oops: This Haiku is about as holy as I can get any more.

I must get lucky once in a while and write one by sheer accident.
Follow that train of thought
Choo choo on the words
Till the end of the line
that one struck a spark, very helpful

haiku mystery
can't understand or explain
it beats me, mousey

I always seem to hear a little Theramin music in the background when I come here.

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Post by mousey1 » April 4th, 2005, 8:00 pm

This is a nice place full of nice people. What better place to vent and rant, we all need to you know. And if they think we're a little nootz, so be it, we probably are. :wink:

I think everything I write might be by accident....a hit and run. :shock: Caught leaving the scene of the crime her response was....."I didn't see a thing officer". :roll:

Haiku Silver and away!
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » April 12th, 2005, 8:36 am

This is a nice place full of nice people
Now it is, after the descent of the harbinger of distaste was booted out.

R.I.P.
pushing up daisies
tombstone for doggies' pee
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by mousey1 » April 12th, 2005, 11:23 am

Nice place, nice guys and gals. Interesting to say the least.

But who's booted out?

Not PZ.....again!!! GeeZ, I find him completely humourous, sometimes distasteful, but our pallettes vary. You all have history tho that I am not privy to. I just prefer acceptance. I think it's important that we all accept each other as we are....but, what do I know.

Ah well
Haichoo
Haichoo

He'll be back.....

I've always liked the term "pushing up daisies"....but then I like daisies.

Remember that line from "Tombstone"
Doc Holiday...
"You're no daisy sih." A sweet, sweet line
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » April 13th, 2005, 2:03 pm

pushing up daisies
on boot hill
kicking up dirt
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by mousey1 » April 17th, 2005, 10:18 pm

Time
Ticks
Off


Days
Swallowed
Whole


Life
Choked
Down


Get
A
Life
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » April 18th, 2005, 9:05 am

a life poem
a death poem
beating the blues

ride the rails
rail against the wind
stiff gusts break trees

windows crash in
soaked stench
less is more

what then?
vacant lots
and weeds growing.

i got a life
breathing space
insinct patience and strong coffee.
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » April 18th, 2005, 4:07 pm

spring allegies
small price
ku kook achoo

every spring
death reborn
a simple life

seasons of life
december chill
april's hope

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Post by jimboloco » April 29th, 2005, 8:58 am

Time
Ticks
Off


Days
Swallowed
Whole


Life
Choked
Down


Get
A
Life
mousey
gets
down

man
she
can

wail
and
moan

woe
is
me
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by mousey1 » April 29th, 2005, 3:45 pm

Woe
Is
Me

Woe
Is
You

What
You gonna
Do

Hai choo
Hai choo
God bless you!

Sneeze again
Wheeze again
Haichoo blues
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mousey1 » April 30th, 2005, 12:52 pm

Shoo bee
This flower
Is dead
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » May 5th, 2005, 7:51 am

bee here now
buzzing train
thoughts of you.
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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