Mousey's attempts at Haichoo

[mousey1]

Dead flower
Crazy bee
Fit to a tee

[jimboloco]

dolores parker
sweet wit
buzzed to a tee!

[mousey1]

Buzzed
Stung
Shit!!!!!

Shit!!!!!
Flower
Blooms

Blooms
Bees
Buzzed

Buzzed
Ran
Away

Possible titles for this grouping of questionable Haikus:

The Circle of Life

or

It's a B's Life

or

How the Haichooist got Stung!

or

Owed to a Bee

[jimboloco]

type B persona
smiles and whiles
A zoomz by!

[jimboloco]

I feel a bit naked
being looked at like this
poked and clicked at

It's not that
I really even like mice

not that I dislike them
just that we have never really
been introduced properly
still
this is not bad
as jobs go

Mousey's mouse
http://www.buddhamind.info/riteside/oct ... tofuzz.htm

[mousey1]

Mousey's mouse.....


Look familiar hmmmmmmm?

[jimboloco]

somehow i get a deja vú vibe here......
but in your hands it's gotto be heaven
real trippy!
now i have seen almost everything,
though i can imagine there's more

[mousey1]

deja vu vibe hunh?

Yes, tis true mice and women can be cruel.

Actually my hands are quite cold

So to be touched by them is quite startling even to myself.
Actually I think I'm dead
I must remember to check for a pulse
Where is
the pulse
of a mouse(shoulda wrote mulse to be poetically correct )

yes, there's always more, ain't that what makes life so grand....
man

[mousey1]

Now back to the haichoo train of thought.

Knock knock
Haichoo
Haichoo who
gaaaaaazuuuuuuhn........tite

four lines in haiku?
unheard of!
four lines in haichoo?
perfectly acceptable!

after all..... who make the rules?

mousey make the rules!!!!

I am past strange!

[jimboloco]

well all right!
an opening!
doors of perception
know socialised mind
paradigm'z complete
commander in cheif
and orthodox dogmatic belief
"why, they made the uniformz and the big machines and
trained me, and my grandmother is proud
so it must be ok'" oh year then when
the paradigm got smashed, pierced
through the doorz and into
realized alienation
and the fall came,
long and hard,
years spent
wandering
alone
down
beat
stubborn
coming back
slow return made anew
scarred, wearied, almost content,
yet in spite of my grandma and grandpa's lament
their vehement hatred of what I had did, er, done
my conscientious objector stance, refusing to fly tankerz
of the u.s. air farce, my gawd, what had they spawned???
oh yeah, ha ha, the shock of the strange
beyond their range
but it's my comfort zone.

[stilltrucking]

That guy standing just to the left of the line, looks like an old friend of mine

The search for truth is indiviual
not congregational
To climb high one must begin low

Krishnamurti
***

Going to cut the tieing lies
let my mind drift so blind
I won't worry what I am going to find
I can't fall off the edge of my mind

jitterbug
***
Blessed are those
who have not seen
yet believe

I believe you
***
a mousey rules Haiku

[mousey1]

And I thought four lines was a stretch!

You boys really grabbed the haichoo and ran with it!!!!

no rules
is good
rules

mousey rules
in her
dreams

[stilltrucking]

the mouse that roared

mouse dreams
cat naps
sister courage

[tinkerjack]

BTW

I should have used a apostrophe, did not mean that you were the queen of the Haiku board, that honor is SooZen's, I meant I was writting by Mousey's rules. haiku according to a free spirit.

I don't know who you are does not matter. But the woman I had in mind when I wrote to you, she used to have a one eyed parrot named Jack

so long for a while

[mousey1]

Tinky.....I tinky you overthinky!!!!!

Bye Bye Tinky....for awhile....is still going with ya?