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Mousey's attempts at Haichoo

Posted: March 31st, 2005, 8:41 pm
by mousey1
Follow that train of thought
Choo choo on the words
Till the end of the line



Hai choo Hai choo
God bless you
Hai choo



I once was so serious
That I became a fool
And laughed and laughed and laughed

Posted: April 1st, 2005, 5:29 am
by stilltrucking
"time defragments the soul"
It takes time
Waiting for data to appear
disambiguous




gezz
zunt
hight

I liked them a lot 8)








musings on haiku
hijacked SooZen Post
I once used an emoticon :D with arcadia because he praised one of my ku's. that has bothered me
a insincere emoticon. I really wasn't that happy about it.
just a monentary relief like a sneeze.
there is more happiness in reading them then writting them
so it seems to me.

Posted: April 2nd, 2005, 12:58 am
by mousey1
musings on haiku
heh, in my case, mousings on haichoo :)

I'm no haikuist, as you may note, but yes I had fun. Just playing about abit. Nice you liked.

I almost used gazuntight (or however you spell it) instead of God Bless You, it was a literary call :shock: :lol:

My views and musings, or mousings as the case may be on emoticons is that one can never abuse, misuse or overuse them, they are pictures worth a thousand words..case in point....
:P

and yes, your post made me (insert smiley emoticon here) :)

Thanks for readin'

Posted: April 2nd, 2005, 8:47 pm
by stilltrucking
I don't have a clue about it comrade, if it had not been for SooZen I wouldn't even try. The other day I used this s board to vent my anger, I am not proud of that. :oops: This Haiku is about as holy as I can get any more.

I must get lucky once in a while and write one by sheer accident.
Follow that train of thought
Choo choo on the words
Till the end of the line
that one struck a spark, very helpful

haiku mystery
can't understand or explain
it beats me, mousey

I always seem to hear a little Theramin music in the background when I come here.

Posted: April 4th, 2005, 8:00 pm
by mousey1
This is a nice place full of nice people. What better place to vent and rant, we all need to you know. And if they think we're a little nootz, so be it, we probably are. :wink:

I think everything I write might be by accident....a hit and run. :shock: Caught leaving the scene of the crime her response was....."I didn't see a thing officer". :roll:

Haiku Silver and away!

Posted: April 12th, 2005, 8:36 am
by jimboloco
This is a nice place full of nice people
Now it is, after the descent of the harbinger of distaste was booted out.

R.I.P.
pushing up daisies
tombstone for doggies' pee

Posted: April 12th, 2005, 11:23 am
by mousey1
Nice place, nice guys and gals. Interesting to say the least.

But who's booted out?

Not PZ.....again!!! GeeZ, I find him completely humourous, sometimes distasteful, but our pallettes vary. You all have history tho that I am not privy to. I just prefer acceptance. I think it's important that we all accept each other as we are....but, what do I know.

Ah well
Haichoo
Haichoo

He'll be back.....

I've always liked the term "pushing up daisies"....but then I like daisies.

Remember that line from "Tombstone"
Doc Holiday...
"You're no daisy sih." A sweet, sweet line

Posted: April 13th, 2005, 2:03 pm
by jimboloco
pushing up daisies
on boot hill
kicking up dirt

Posted: April 17th, 2005, 10:18 pm
by mousey1
Time
Ticks
Off


Days
Swallowed
Whole


Life
Choked
Down


Get
A
Life

Posted: April 18th, 2005, 9:05 am
by jimboloco
a life poem
a death poem
beating the blues

ride the rails
rail against the wind
stiff gusts break trees

windows crash in
soaked stench
less is more

what then?
vacant lots
and weeds growing.

i got a life
breathing space
insinct patience and strong coffee.

Posted: April 18th, 2005, 4:07 pm
by stilltrucking
spring allegies
small price
ku kook achoo

every spring
death reborn
a simple life

seasons of life
december chill
april's hope

Posted: April 29th, 2005, 8:58 am
by jimboloco
Time
Ticks
Off


Days
Swallowed
Whole


Life
Choked
Down


Get
A
Life
mousey
gets
down

man
she
can

wail
and
moan

woe
is
me

Posted: April 29th, 2005, 3:45 pm
by mousey1
Woe
Is
Me

Woe
Is
You

What
You gonna
Do

Hai choo
Hai choo
God bless you!

Sneeze again
Wheeze again
Haichoo blues

Posted: April 30th, 2005, 12:52 pm
by mousey1
Shoo bee
This flower
Is dead

Posted: May 5th, 2005, 7:51 am
by jimboloco
bee here now
buzzing train
thoughts of you.