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Post by sasha » April 13th, 2016, 9:20 am

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"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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Post by the mingo » April 13th, 2016, 10:38 am

Welcome - 8) good haiga
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by sasha » April 13th, 2016, 11:03 am

thanks - something about abandoned buildings I can't pass up. Nice to meet you!
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Post by Arcadia » April 13th, 2016, 9:20 pm

does the radiator work...? :mrgreen:

great photo & question! bienvenido!

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Post by saw » April 14th, 2016, 10:04 am

welcome to S8....very nice, the photo is a great accompanist to the words.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
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Post by sasha » April 14th, 2016, 10:29 am

Arcadia wrote:does the radiator work...? :mrgreen:

great photo & question! bienvenido!
thanks! The inspection tag on the boiler was dated 1987, and the photo was shot in 2007, so there's no telling how much crud had ossified in the radiator!


saw wrote:welcome to S8....very nice, the photo is a great accompanist to the words.... 8)
thanks - that photo is one of my favorite children
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Re: haiga

Post by saw » April 21st, 2016, 8:56 am

hidden inside the cast iron
ancient rusty water
holds lifetimes of bleeding air
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: haiga

Post by judih » April 22nd, 2016, 11:09 pm

one lone sock
buried under years
hopes for retrieval

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Post by sasha » April 23rd, 2016, 5:07 pm

empty house
memories echo
down its halls
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Re: haiga

Post by WIREMAN » April 23rd, 2016, 5:49 pm

doomed incompletion
rebar exposed
rain turning to rust
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: haiga

Post by sasha » April 26th, 2016, 8:30 am

rusted machinery
skeletal remains of
long-dead factory
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