2-line rhymed haiku 5-5

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2-line rhymed haiku 5-5

Post by Doreen Peri » March 18th, 2022, 8:02 pm

New diagnosis
Spinal stenosis

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Post by judih » March 18th, 2022, 11:05 pm

serious doreen
nothing in your spleen?

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 18th, 2022, 11:36 pm

I guess.
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Post by judih » March 19th, 2022, 2:52 am

hallelujah
love hugs to ya

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Post by sasha » March 19th, 2022, 10:13 am

aging ain't no fun
when health is on the run
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"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 19th, 2022, 12:01 pm

Cannot run a block.
I can barely walk.

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Post by judih » March 19th, 2022, 1:36 pm

in dealing with pain
rhymes bolster the brain

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 19th, 2022, 6:13 pm

Narcotic effect?
Why not? What the heck?

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Post by judih » March 19th, 2022, 11:07 pm

equal rights for spine
finally time to whine

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Re: 2-line rhymed haiku 5-5

Post by saw » March 20th, 2022, 11:38 am

older than dirt
no longer a flirt
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 20th, 2022, 1:42 pm

Hahahaha
Hahahaha

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 20th, 2022, 3:07 pm

Rhyming couplets rock!
Fun around the clock!

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Post by sasha » March 20th, 2022, 5:27 pm

left hip fixed - hurray!
right hip says - "my turn..."
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Post by judih » March 20th, 2022, 11:08 pm

daring disaster
rhymes appear faster

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Re: 2-line rhymed haiku 5-5

Post by Doreen Peri » March 21st, 2022, 11:24 am

Sasha, me too!
Left hip to do.
May 17th.
Spine later, geesh!

Judih, disasters?
I’m becoming a master.

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