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perfect

Post by winddance » March 5th, 2024, 6:07 pm

with a little work
you could be perfect
almost
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than teach 10,000 stars how not to dance.
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Re: perfect

Post by saw » March 6th, 2024, 8:26 am

striving
to reach the top
okay here
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: perfect

Post by sasha » March 6th, 2024, 8:52 am

nine out of ten
ain't bad
.
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