sunset

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sunset

Post by winddance » May 22nd, 2024, 9:58 pm

sunset sneaks in
through a crack
in the clouds
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than teach 10,000 stars how not to dance.
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Re: sunset

Post by sasha » May 24th, 2024, 9:08 am

love the image - evocative
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Re: sunset

Post by saw » May 24th, 2024, 10:01 am

the sky dark
aroused by nimbus paintings
streaks of sunlit rays
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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