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wisp his
Posted: May 14th, 2005, 9:37 am
by mtmynd
under eighteen
the syllables piling up
keeping within the rules
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eternal micro-showers
the dust covers all
remains to be seen
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i sold the haiku-koo bird
cheap!
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Posted: May 14th, 2005, 9:00 pm
by mousey1
Haikus
Under eighteen
No booze
What's a haiku-koo bird going for these days? I've lost track.
Posted: May 14th, 2005, 9:54 pm
by mtmynd
You maka me laff, Mousey! and that is good, real good.
I was boozed up when i named a price for that Haiku-koo bird... something I oughten (?) had done... the person snatched it up quickly. Darn me! But a sale is a sale is a sale... eh?
Yeah, haikus are syllabically under-count... one must be cautious when writing those things. One never knows who may be watching.
Posted: May 15th, 2005, 5:40 pm
by jimboloco
wisp
fly swatter
bzzzz
Posted: May 16th, 2005, 9:23 am
by stilltrucking
dreaming of Haiku
No shoes no shirt no artifice
Just five eight four
The sum of my fears
Seventeen syllable death
Born in my dreams
No salvation
No death
No fear
I have heard that when one dreams of being naked it is a dream of death.
Posted: May 18th, 2005, 4:22 pm
by e_dog
Hai kool
Cool high
low dose
Posted: May 24th, 2005, 1:39 pm
by jimboloco