Let's play this game: Breathe

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Let's play this game: Breathe

Post by izeveryboyin » February 21st, 2006, 11:44 pm

Haiku... your favortie place to breathe. 17 syllables. Terrible insight. Don't forget to breathe. Me first:

...In a nightime tale
...In a shoebox
...On a wall, all the time Ok?
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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Post by stilltrucking » February 22nd, 2006, 7:58 am

in an icu ward
under water
any time~any place at all


in an ocean breeze
on a sail boat
in the first breath from birth

nice work izzy :D

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Post by sooZen » February 23rd, 2006, 7:32 am

haiku zazen counting breaths
not counting breaths zazen haiku
okay?

...


17 is a number
can this be seventeen?
well...you tell me


...


hidden from sight
revealed in an instant
the mind's eye






:lol:
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by ButtercupNutSwirlz » February 23rd, 2006, 3:04 pm

nonsensical gibberish
in haiku form
makes me sneeze easy

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Post by izeveryboyin » February 23rd, 2006, 8:17 pm

invariably I fuck over and
die b/c I
keep forgetting to breathe through my eyes.
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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Post by ButtercupNutSwirlz » March 4th, 2006, 12:23 pm

God nose
I can't breathe through my eyes
I've tried


just breathe
don't forget to breathe
life's like that

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Post by stilltrucking » August 4th, 2006, 2:25 pm

I take three breaths
and no longer see
the multiplicity

a gonzo buddha
will die barely a novice
knowing nothing

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Post by stilltrucking » August 17th, 2006, 8:01 am

do what you love
I love to breathe
and smoke

busy being born
busy dying
all is well

dual drive ku
a death rattle
and silence

morning
mourning
august 33rd

there is never a pond or a babbling brook around when I need one,

Sitting in the gray predawn light
slanting through the windows
waiting for a train

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Post by stilltrucking » August 17th, 2006, 8:36 am

In gray predawn light
I listen to the buzz
while I wait for a train

666 special
midnight sunlight
shine your ever lovin light on me

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Post by jimboloco » August 20th, 2006, 1:43 am

wide awake
a latenite break
from th jewel mine

no sweat on my brow now
i breathe in freely
i receive th gift of life

ah so my lungs were made for marijuana
i breathe out slowly
an give thankx for th gift of life

backyard patio
latenight insomniac wired
quiet sounds of nite
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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