Midnight

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Midnight

Post by stilltrucking » March 20th, 2006, 2:56 am

Thunder lightning
Rain and trains
makes me happy

A rainy spring night
a train passing by
A sweet lullaby

falling water
steel wheels rumble
keyboard clicking

sound and light flashes
sensory satisfaction
momentary pause

fading
storm and train
moving on

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Post by e_dog » March 29th, 2006, 4:46 am

dig this.
a lot.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by Artguy » March 30th, 2006, 9:44 pm

TV blaring
Dog crunching bits
fingers tapping

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Post by stilltrucking » March 31st, 2006, 10:18 pm

fingers tapping
computer whirs
loud car Exhaust

gorgeous banner
wont let me go
a circus clown colors

no train
no rain
evening breeze


train, horn
coming and going
rumble jangle roar

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Post by lenny » April 23rd, 2006, 10:13 pm

Haiku: three line poem composed of five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables, respectively - often but not exclusively related to nature and originating from Japan. Please don't hate me!!!

Thunder shakes the house
lightning sillhouettes abound
hard rain pounds soaked ground.


I swear, the devil made me do it!

Be well,

lenny
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Post by judih » April 23rd, 2006, 10:21 pm

night dreams explode
sudden fever shakes the ground
bird calls bring rain


(not classical haiku - but a true representative of my natural experience this pre-dawn morning)

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Post by lenny » April 23rd, 2006, 10:37 pm

Hey judih....'I don't know what it is I like about you but I like it a lot!' Okay, I stole it from Zeppelin. ls. You're an original, girl, truly.

Be well,

lenny
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Post by judih » April 23rd, 2006, 11:15 pm

tired eyes bulge
weak smile to a friend
robert plants a paige

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Post by lenny » April 24th, 2006, 12:30 am

12:30 a.m. here now. Tired eyes about to retire. Now it's time to say good-night...good night, sleep tight...golden slumbers fill your eyes...smile awaits you when you rise...sleep pretty darlin' do not cry...and I will sing a lullaby...- Thanks John. Paul? Not sure anymore. ls.

Be well, judih,

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