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Surreal-ku

Posted: March 7th, 2007, 4:58 am
by e_dog
(after Kerouac, with apologies)

Your pussy
was wet
from walking in the rain.

Posted: March 7th, 2007, 10:39 am
by stilltrucking
I liked it but I don't get the allusion to Kerouac.



Clear skies and sunshine
Hiroshima walkers
Now shadows

a surreal peanut ku
you just can't eat one

Posted: March 7th, 2007, 7:05 pm
by e_dog
he wrote a -ku something like:

the soles of my shoes
are wet
from walking in the rain.

Posted: March 8th, 2007, 1:26 am
by stilltrucking
Kerouac
breaks my heart