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Jam #3 Abstract Shadow Play

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 3:44 pm
by iblieve
Image


what do you see
iblieve
an eclipse maybe

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 3:59 pm
by Doreen Peri
I see a woman,
golden hair flowing,
blown by a mountain
breeze in autumn,
standing, back arched,
like a figurehead on
the bow of a ship.

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 4:00 pm
by Doreen Peri
She has her hand to her mouth!
She is yelling "Come home!" to her
lover who has fled.
Her dress is stained.
Her garment represents
her pain.

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 4:02 pm
by Lightning Rod
or could be the shadow of a woman
who died in grief. torment in silhouette

shadow upon the sand

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 4:05 pm
by iblieve
could be could be
her lover lost at sea
or it could be
??

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 4:13 pm
by Doreen Peri
She came home in disarray.
Her skirt was ripped, her
blue eyes gray. She was
weeping. She spoke of rape.
He didn't believe her claim.
He suspected infidelity.
He vanished on a wave,
left their love in a grave.

And now he navigates
uncharted seas.
No matter her pleas,
he could not believe.
She has been defiled
and then abandoned.
She grieves.
She grieves.

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 4:54 pm
by iblieve
Oh to be abandoned
in her time of need,
his love was but
masqueraded greed
to feed his need
but truth does,
come out in waves
as she becomes
memories slave.
In shadowed motion
we see her fade
eclipsed by her pain.

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 6:11 pm
by e-piph[lol]
oh, the negative space
3 dimensions turned to two
to one
to none

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 7:16 pm
by iblieve
negative space becomes positive
when piph hits the poetic stage
drop those word two by two to one
epiphanies mean time for fun.

Now the pic
was a trick
simply me
"C"
takin a picture
of my shadow.
LMFAO.

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 7:17 pm
by Arcadia
there is something
specially empty
in spring

Posted: September 30th, 2005, 8:20 pm
by iblieve
an empty spring when birds won't sing
but my shadow and me
with summer time blues
humming reeling in the years
as the years caught up with me
and I couldn't run no more.

Posted: October 1st, 2005, 1:48 am
by Dandylion
There he stands
flowing in a golden sky,
brown eyes torn away
from the love he craves.
How trodden a heart can look
in the shade
of his shadow.

Posted: October 1st, 2005, 1:52 am
by e-piph[lol]
perfect in form
his lighted frame
do make the world move
and shadows
but follow his game


hello, mrs. iblieve

Posted: October 1st, 2005, 2:00 am
by Dandylion
His frame, his game,
his master plan,
to spread the word
of poetry and jam.

Hey piphJ

Posted: October 1st, 2005, 12:59 pm
by iblieve
My game stays the same
to love you forever
until then we will live in bliss
shadows locked in a kiss