Awaken the Sleeping Lotus with Warm Breaths...

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Awaken the Sleeping Lotus with Warm Breaths...

Post by mtmynd » December 20th, 2005, 8:27 pm

Awaken the Sleeping Lotus with Warm Breaths from Liquid Dragons

adverse to calamity
logic stepped in on
embroidered feet
the letter 'a' repeated
ad infinitum across ankles
weakened by weekends spent
staring into feathers
stolen from birds never seen

with myopic wanderlust
still out of focus
the bear trampled the woods
in search of destiny
only to find bleached remains
thrown in random patterns
that spelled an end to life

beginning of dreams awoke!
a gentle lost sun
one ray peeking from shadows
now set free
rebounding into skies
embraced by arms of ether
suspending de-light forever

pollack’s hand
dripping with
maps to beyond-
consciousness
revealing its
perpetuity...
drop by drop

(drink the dragon)


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judih
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Post by judih » December 21st, 2005, 12:07 am

excellent elixir
this surely came from a rich inner adventure

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Post by MrGuilty » December 22nd, 2005, 12:10 pm

excellent elixir
this surely came from a rich inner adventure
I will drink to that.

:D
I used to be smart

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Post by mtmynd » December 23rd, 2005, 1:08 am

Drink deeply from the cup... always (at least) half full... the dragon makes sure of that..! :wink:

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Post by Artguy » December 26th, 2005, 1:47 pm

Drip drip goes each thought onto canvas consciousness.....

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