Story Challenge 3/9

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Post by Marksman45 » March 22nd, 2005, 9:24 pm

Hey you, that's only 1 Steve, at least 2 are required :P

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Post by mousey1 » March 22nd, 2005, 9:36 pm

Ahem.

I say....

Ahem.

I draw your nit-picky attention to:
Steve Bennington II
count 'em, count 'em

:) 1 Stevie :) 2 Stevie

You're worse than Simon Cowell!!!!

And what about the unborn child whom I fully, er, whom she fully intends to name Steve. Hmmmmmm?

:lol:
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Post by mousey1 » March 23rd, 2005, 9:12 pm

Is the jury still out?

Have I been 'squalified?

I demand a recount!

I know my rights! (I don't have any :roll: )

Sorry Marksy :) There's one in every crowd. :lol:
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Post by Traveller13notloggedin » March 24th, 2005, 4:29 am

I'd give it...
a big fat K out of 11
with an extra half-point for the ending

as for the jury, you didn't hear it from me but they're only jealous because they can't think of a better story
but shhhhhhhshhshshhh
okay
shhhshhhhhh

"And what about the unborn child whom I fully, er, whom she fully intends to name Steve. Hmmmmmm?"

Yikes!
here's the next writing challenge subject
"The Great Steve Invasion"

( :?: )

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Post by Doreen Peri » March 24th, 2005, 1:06 pm

hey traveler - thanks for typing your name as not logged in... when we set up the forum, we forgot to set the permissions for registered users only... fixed now! :)

I love the story challenge...

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Post by mousey1 » March 26th, 2005, 2:17 pm

Heh Heh!

Thank-you for your support Traveller....

I feel somewhat mollified. :)

As for the jury....I had my suspicions about this...I shall tell no one...shhhhhh.....Steve's the word. :wink:

:lol:
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Post by Marksman45 » March 27th, 2005, 1:31 am

Oh, I see, I vanish for a few days and you're all already conspiring my demise, is that it? Hah! You thought I wouldn't be prepared! But I *am* prepared, I have prepared long and hard for this moment, and it has paid off in Full!!

and..

...wait a second, which one is Simon Cowell again?


Anyway~
I'm ready for a new challenge to begin -->>>
SO, I select Mr. Traveler13 as the "winner," meaning that he gets to come up with the next story challenge list

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Post by Traveller13 » March 31st, 2005, 6:53 am

:D

I love being selected.
lol

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Post by jimboloco » March 31st, 2005, 2:38 pm

Ah, the cud chewing cow and the gum chewing gal......
consider the thoughtful expression on the face of the cow....
You, at this point, might well be asking yourself "Just how bright is this chick?" Well, let me tell you.

to be continued.....

NOT!
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by mousey1 » March 31st, 2005, 7:31 pm

Well done Traveller1
No sour strawberry preserves here! :)

Marksy, Simon Cowell is the one with the oh so sexay English accent.....and the tyrannical ways. :)

Cud chewing cows definitely have the 'thoughtful expression' look all sewed up or chewed up.....
but.....
then there's this....
Image
minus the cud of course!

or this......
Image
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » April 1st, 2005, 10:16 am

ImageImageImage


MY FAVORITE!!!!!
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by mousey1 » April 2nd, 2005, 1:22 am

Speaking of avatars, your present one is lolable!!!! I loled.
Sometimes my humour is like that little avatar of yours :D Hit ya on the head, slap ya in the face, just plain bad.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » April 2nd, 2005, 12:24 pm

it was for april fools day only.
i am not that goofy.
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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