Mourning Becomes Electra But Oedipus Wrecks

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Mourning Becomes Electra But Oedipus Wrecks

Post by stilltrucking » November 12th, 2007, 5:24 pm

the body electra Freudian priests obsidian words martyred poet on the couch a Hippocratic oath betrayed


to be continued I hope

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Post by mtmynd » November 13th, 2007, 10:06 am

sail on...

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Post by stilltrucking » November 14th, 2007, 10:38 am

she said she could a been prostitute instead of a poet
she could make a man feel so sexually powerful

betrayed by her daddy in her bedroom at night
and then spanked for being a "filthy little bitch"

tortured by her fears
she sought help

and when a healer betrays a trust
instead of resuing fair damsel
and kissing his couch before he rides of into the sunset
no he was a putz
and stuck around to get laid

non phallic masculinity
a rare commodity among the preists of freud

she was born an innocent trusting child
ain't we all
how is that karma distrubeted at birth?
why do some
get such a heavy load?

so they can lighten the burden for other's?

when she suckled jesus
she suckled me also.

just a blurt
spontaneous spewing
to be edited I hope

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