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the mingo
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poetry

Post by the mingo » July 5th, 2008, 5:38 pm

poetry -
what little we know
about it just
confuses us -

we are on
the flat here and so
fill the distance with vanities
for company

I know it
when I read it
and it
knows me
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by westcoast » July 5th, 2008, 6:00 pm

2 true

~westie

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Post by stilltrucking » July 5th, 2008, 9:10 pm

yeah
exactly
for me it is the amount of information a poem gives me.
something so ecconomical in the use of words in a poem.
So much in so few words,

I would say that was a poem mingo
I could ramble for a five hundred words and not express it so eloquently.

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