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Post by still.trucking » June 7th, 2009, 12:34 pm

Peachy women make me hungry.
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Post by still.trucking » June 8th, 2009, 8:59 am

He knows lust and dust.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 8th, 2009, 9:11 am

He knows lust; she desire.
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Post by still.trucking » June 8th, 2009, 1:34 pm

He desires power over her.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 8th, 2009, 6:28 pm

She overpowers him with desire.
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Post by still.trucking » June 9th, 2009, 9:38 am

Her avatar makes him nervous.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 9th, 2009, 10:54 am

She wonders why he's nervous.
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Post by still.trucking » June 9th, 2009, 11:41 am

he wamts to forget desire
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Post by .Lucy. » June 9th, 2009, 11:45 am

Desire: Is this his nervousness?
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Post by still.trucking » June 9th, 2009, 12:15 pm

Beauty, truth in five words.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 9th, 2009, 12:35 pm

Truth, exponentially evolving in time...
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Post by .Lucy. » June 9th, 2009, 12:46 pm

She digresses. She loves apples.
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Post by still.trucking » June 9th, 2009, 1:02 pm

He punctuates for her: toothlessly.

Prefers peaches when in season.


The intention behind his intention

The intellect behind her mask

Flesh and blood(,) lust, and dust

His heart solipsises passion

He cheats takes six turns.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 9th, 2009, 1:05 pm

He takes his turns, unabashedly.
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Post by .Lucy. » June 9th, 2009, 1:07 pm

He pounces yet she retreats.
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