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Post by mtmynd » August 12th, 2009, 4:04 pm

((Lucy... it's your turn now...))
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Post by still.trucking » August 12th, 2009, 6:00 pm

She comes and goes when it pleases her



I am an old fucking fool Lucy two dots

Pay me no mind

I think you are marvelous

that's all

He sits and wonders why

She has two dots

and he has only one

sorry I lost count
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Post by still.trucking » August 14th, 2009, 2:30 pm

Fangio retires, it is finished.
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Post by jackofnightmares » September 4th, 2009, 6:44 pm

Whose turn is it now?
"Skepticism is the chastity of the intellect" Santayana The Idea of Christ in the Gospels

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Post by myrna minkoff » September 4th, 2009, 6:51 pm

Race car drivers are superstitious.

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Post by jackofnightmares » September 4th, 2009, 7:00 pm

Ascari so fearful he vomited.

Yes tomorrow will be better
"Skepticism is the chastity of the intellect" Santayana The Idea of Christ in the Gospels

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 25th, 2009, 8:41 pm

Too many ideas became unrealized.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 12th, 2009, 10:27 pm

I always say too much.

He still thinks time's short.

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Post by SadLuckDame » December 12th, 2009, 11:31 pm

He painted her lips hastily.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
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Post by Doreen Peri » December 13th, 2009, 12:25 am

She combed his frizzy hair.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 13th, 2009, 9:20 am

He shaved his frizzy brain

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Post by SadLuckDame » December 13th, 2009, 12:17 pm

She dialed up for room-service.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
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Post by Doreen Peri » December 13th, 2009, 12:32 pm

The butler wore a tuxedo.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 13th, 2009, 1:03 pm

She tips him twenty bucks

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Post by Doreen Peri » December 13th, 2009, 3:19 pm

He spends it on dope.

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