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No Mistaking Maldrake the Innocent

Posted: June 9th, 2005, 11:08 am
by mtmynd
an earthbound comet
spinning with delirium
igniting the bouquet
set before the valentine
as words drift seamlessly
into pungent soundscapes
replete with foam and figs
harboring the testicular joy
wrapped between blankets
woven from sonic booms
unleashed into the skies
resembling pincushions
fashioned from fantasy
lost in echoes bouncing
endlessly in the void of tremolos


(no mistaking maldrake the innocent)

Posted: June 9th, 2005, 11:46 am
by mousey1
:) There may be some mistaking of maldrake the innocent! We shall see. I'll mull on this one for awhile as usual and get back to you. :)

All this interpretive, critiquing stuff is consuming...of time and mind...mt. :)

Posted: July 29th, 2005, 12:35 pm
by mousey1
ORGASM!!!!!

It's about the big O

O O O!!!!

I don't think I'd change a word!

That's what I get from it anyway! Am I correct? I Ope so!

"No mistaking maldrake the innocent"

nO

(if I'm wrong I'll be sOOOOOOO embarassed!!! :oops:)

Posted: July 29th, 2005, 1:04 pm
by mtmynd
:lol: :lol: :lol: mousey, my friend! two months to figure this one out, eh? with those time limits set to my poems, i'd better hang it up to dry... :wink: i really like your interp, kid... really! i'll buy that one!!

Posted: July 29th, 2005, 2:46 pm
by mousey1
That's not the only thing it takes me two months to reach btw....

but....

let's not go there!!!! :oops:

Orgasm it is then.....righty O!


(OI am so easily amused!) :D

I am O for 2!!!


ps: don't hang it up to dry.....if you don't use it you'll lose it!!!