Fabulous Doreen takes a turn on the dance floor w/the Dame

Writing collaborations for two.
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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » January 3rd, 2010, 3:34 pm

Susan pursed her red lips in a smack
and lifted the back of her skirt
high moon style,
just like that. Real sentimental!
See I told you women are so sentimental.

Enjoyed this duet very much.
you should kick it up to creative. imo

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SadLuckDame
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Post by SadLuckDame » January 3rd, 2010, 10:55 pm

Duets spring back from the death would be nice, I'm fond of them.
I'd vote a yeah to bumping them up.
Jack,
maybe see you knocking out one too sometime soon here. wink
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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