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Pools of pondering
Posted: April 16th, 2006, 1:06 pm
by mousey1
A bit like life
you have to find the sparkly bits
you have to look for the sparkly bits
toe them
prod them
pick them up
at least notice them
they are there
little diamonds in the blackest sky
little dancers
in the murky stream
little lights
resting behind perfect eyes
Posted: April 16th, 2006, 4:15 pm
by gypsyjoker
at least notice them
Yep
I had to trip over a sparkly bit and fall flat on my face
But it was a lucky day I did
At last I have noticed that I am alive
Posted: April 16th, 2006, 11:41 pm
by whimsicaldeb
I had to trip over a sparkly bit and fall flat on my face
brought me closer
and the shimmers dramatically shook their hips at me as I landed
The bluegreenteal bits kept beaconing
but in the end, it was the tiny blue heart
that opened me
Posted: April 23rd, 2006, 1:17 pm
by Ann Bingham
diamonds floating in the ruff
precision cut each one a gem
stars aloft in a pool so clear
sharing their dreams
their beauty
with me
Posted: April 23rd, 2006, 9:46 pm
by capiCrimm
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sparkle sparkle little drips in my -- magic mirror
that devouring power of --
tearing hearts
so enchanting
that dancing by the waters
little girls prancing
glimpsing raindrops seem drawn --
to the pleasant dim of dawn
or that pleasant taste of tears
spawned by those fears of
fawns turning to deers
oh lovely you my magic mirror.
with flooding bays:
engulfing little girls...
sitting, watching reflections fade away...
relfelctions might be shadows or something else... I really can't say. I don't think I've ever written a poem without having a ton of alternate scentences and words. For this though it's what I got, and I hope it was what we were supposed to do....
it's in a code block because html and me disagree, I consider white-space signifigant
Posted: December 23rd, 2008, 4:27 pm
by gypsyjoker
I notice my reflection on the surface of my eye
Like looking at a bubble
a shiny tenuous thing held together by a fragile tension.
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