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haiku moment 2

Posted: July 9th, 2008, 7:03 am
by stilltrucking
בצלת ḥăḇaṣṣeleṯ,
1I am the rose of Sharon, and the lily of the valleys.

2As the lily among thorns, so is my love among the daughters.

Song of Solomon KJV
A haiku is not just a pretty picture in three lines of 5-7-5 syllables each. In fact, most haiku in English are not writtten in 5-7-5 syllables at all -- many are not even written in three lines. What distinguishes a haiku is concision, perception and awareness -- not a set number of syllables. A haiku is a short poem recording the essence of a moment keenly perceived in which Nature is linked to human nature.

http://www.litkicks.com/OnWesternHaiku/


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rose_of_Sharon

http://maludan.3dtoast.com/roseofsharon.php
the Rose of Sharon (this name used for at least three different plants by different people: Hypericum calycinum, Lilium candidum and Tulipa agenensis subsp. boissieri)

http://www.rbgsyd.nsw.gov.au/plant_info ... sification


my rose of san antone
a withered blossom
falls to earth
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>?

petals from an autumn rose

Posted: July 9th, 2008, 11:05 am
by mtmynd
Re: Paul Repps - Zen Flesh, Zen Bones

Posted: July 9th, 2008, 11:47 am
by stilltrucking

Posted: July 9th, 2008, 11:55 am
by mtmynd
you da man!

:lol:

Re: haiku moment 2

Posted: March 23rd, 2014, 11:22 pm
by stilltrucking
Hitomaro
100 poems from the talmud
I waited for my lover till I could hear in the night the oars of the last boat crossing the river of heaven
good bye love
good bye lover good bye
lucky to been here

I have heard that the last thing I touch will be what I will be reincarnated as. I expect to come back as a keyboard

women are born wiser
we have to catch up if we can
and I was never fast enough
WHO HAST NOT MADE ME A WOMAN

"It was taught: He who has no wife dwells without good, without help, without joy, without blessing, and without atonement."
the fact that men have ... further to go in order to perfect themselves in the world. ...women, on the other hand, in order to accomplish their specific mission, are born more spiritually evolved.