obscurity blurs the vision

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obscurity blurs the vision

Post by mousey1 » February 15th, 2007, 1:57 pm

obscurity blurs the vision
smokey curls wisp and wane their lackluster motivation
hide
behind the eyes a semicolon waits
followup expectations
a ghostly form rises wise and weighty
thoughtful intent takes the place of
diving deep and coming up empty

tomato head
lacking vegetable nutrition
red ripe juicy fright of inhibitions
melancholy jubilance leaping left to right
skipping
inside motion rollercoastering down landslides
overcoming hitting the hindsight bullseye
bellyfull of billowing pride
beyond recognition
bolstering the misbegotten thought posturing
sagging slow devotion
sinking into me floating
meandering past heartshaped whys and
overflowing
question marks fuck me wisely
allseeing allknowing
I need to be more like that
awww shit my watermarks showing
cover me complete
I'm an exaggeration
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by stilltrucking » February 16th, 2007, 10:57 pm

I enjoyed this one a lot mousey1
left me feeling that my head is way too small for my hat
and that is always good for me

thank you for writing

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Post by mousey1 » February 18th, 2007, 3:45 pm

I appreciate your reading stillt...

thanks.

My writing akin to sketching my gray cell brain matter on virtual paper...a stain...
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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