jane again

This is Constantine's artlog. He posted his poems in his own artlog forum for several years. He named the forum "Constantinople" and described it as "A byzantine journey through life's labyrinth."
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constantine
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jane again

Post by constantine » July 5th, 2008, 12:57 pm

jane's a rogue she is
legendary
she can do the double cut-out
and call you in the morning
like you should've known better
what can one do with a woman like that
she's unpredictable
she confounds me
she talks like she's playing chess -
for money, even
her smile has an asterisk
a subtext so self-serving
you don't have to ask for directions
all roads lead to rome
took her out to dinner
been saving up for weeks
i'm a very serious man
she goes to the ladies room
i look nervously at my watch
go jane pulls a bye bye
off to the colosseum -
the thracian again
what can one do with a woman like that
god have mercy on my soul
jane's back

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Post by stilltrucking » July 5th, 2008, 7:38 pm

she talks like she's playing chess -
for money
8)

I am going to steal that line, in fact I already did.

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Post by constantine » July 7th, 2008, 9:32 am

i tried to use that line in another poem, but i couldn't work it out. thanks jack for dropping by.

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