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beginning of the end

Posted: August 23rd, 2008, 5:36 pm
by constantine
it was when you were away from me
that i had the dream
i was waiting outside the hospital
as they wheeled you out in a chair
your parents flanking
they wouldn't look at me
and there was something in your eyes
that wouldn't look at me either
as they wheeled you away
you turned in passing and faded
and i was left alone

Posted: August 23rd, 2008, 6:00 pm
by stilltrucking
and there was something in your eyes
that wouldn't look at me either
words fail me

strong writing constantine

Posted: August 23rd, 2008, 7:32 pm
by constantine
thanks jack. i can't tell you how happy i am that you like my work.