Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

what makes you such a tease
tsahpina, your eyes flirt
and glint with mischief
lips pout, then bared teeth!
what is to become of me?

your hips play tambourine
they give and then taketh away
you babylonian! pickpocket!
come sit with me awhile
we'll smoke the narghile
we'll hubble bubble
take me home with you
tsahpina,
you've done far worse
if the truth be told

i like this one - if i don't say so myself. it's pretty tight.

I liked it too
fine work

of course i like it!

not a 'but' in the room!

thanks judih - you too, jack