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tsahpina

Posted: June 14th, 2011, 8:48 pm
by constantine
what makes you such a tease
tsahpina, your eyes flirt
and glint with mischief
lips pout, then bared teeth!
what is to become of me?

your hips play tambourine
they give and then taketh away
you babylonian! pickpocket!
come sit with me awhile
we'll smoke the narghile
we'll hubble bubble
take me home with you
tsahpina,
you've done far worse
if the truth be told

Re: tsahpina

Posted: June 16th, 2011, 10:50 am
by constantine
i like this one - if i don't say so myself. it's pretty tight.

Re: tsahpina

Posted: June 17th, 2011, 9:20 am
by stilltrucking
I liked it too
fine work

Re: tsahpina

Posted: June 17th, 2011, 10:39 am
by judih
of course i like it!

not a 'but' in the room!

Re: tsahpina

Posted: June 18th, 2011, 4:00 pm
by constantine
thanks judih - you too, jack