Dream Threshold

Making the extraordinary out of the ordinary.
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libberator
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Dream Threshold

Post by libberator » August 16th, 2008, 7:53 pm

Between self-doubt,
project template fascinating,
rage,
strength,
narcissism,
mountaintops latter agony,
vague years exercise,
window event,
jokes and concerns,
already sense the connection,
looks open-hearted massively great.

Between transcendent catches,
associations edge rocks abstraction,
blues history and,
first crippling significant jaundiced criticisms,
gorgeous tries of discourse
sunglasses change ahead stubbornly,
sounds countries drops writing,
earthly twilight.

However open remains infamously,
something popular first to overcome remains,
this outward mother doggedly,
the many cleaned world musicians,
these late nights just turned and,
becoming laying most music,
hear WAR!
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Sunday Cut up To Libby From Trevor!!!

Post by 5unshineDayDream » August 24th, 2008, 9:22 pm

Sunday Cut Up

"Make it stop"

Moment of inner freedom
as the prisoner,
In this womb or tomb,
Breaks down.
No No No
prisoner,
blink in the sun
My friends & I come from
jewels for your black fever
spray flaming,
balanced like lithe demons
What are you doing here?
Look.
guide the earth.
make it stop in its tracks.

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Re: Sunday Cut up To Libby From Trevor!!!

Post by libberator » August 25th, 2008, 9:01 pm

5unshineDayDream wrote:jewels for your black fever
Nice man, it reads like a feverish dream.
welcome to the forums
glad you've finally joined in.

next time post your poetry as a new topic
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