"Make it Stop"

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"Make it Stop"

Post by 5unshineDayDream » August 26th, 2008, 9:55 am

"Make it stop"

Moment of inner freedom
as the prisoner,
In this womb or tomb,
Breaks down.
No No No
blink in the sun
My friends & I come from
jewels for your black fever
spray flaming,
balanced like lithe demons
What are you doing here?
guide the earth.
make it stop in its tracks.

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Re: "Make it Stop"

Post by libberator » August 26th, 2008, 1:41 pm

5unshineDayDream wrote:guide the earth.
make it stop in its tracks.
now you got it man,
nice first submission,
I look forward to reading your future posts.
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