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"Make it Stop"

Posted: August 26th, 2008, 9:55 am
by 5unshineDayDream
"Make it stop"

Moment of inner freedom
as the prisoner,
In this womb or tomb,
Breaks down.
No No No
prisoner,
blink in the sun
My friends & I come from
jewels for your black fever
spray flaming,
balanced like lithe demons
What are you doing here?
Look.
guide the earth.
make it stop in its tracks.

Re: "Make it Stop"

Posted: August 26th, 2008, 1:41 pm
by libberator
5unshineDayDream wrote:guide the earth.
make it stop in its tracks.
now you got it man,
nice first submission,
I look forward to reading your future posts.