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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » March 12th, 2013, 3:02 am

that tall thin lanky woman had begun to 'look different' these days- some dude in a trailor park said' she looks like Ruby Dakota' -- she seemed to roll in like the white calf buffalo woman on a harliegh davidson fat boy- in her new antique= fire that melts even the biggest thug=she walks into some very dark places- and finds some help there- in the trenches-with savvy ? 'n they are fearful and foolish-' she says
she looked around at the crew- dismayed= that somehow these old biker guys had become old unhealthy men with motorcycles- "the cheese is old and moldy where is the bathroom?'sexuality and spirituality- oui - the sleeping sickness- people are so tired- and they really havent done anything- just the same thing over and over- 'get up and do it again'
Ruby Dakota just did whatever she said 'spirits' told her to do-riding here- healing there- hi de ho=== that morning that woman went and claimed her body near the coffee maker and a split hair away from a hostess twinkie- she considered shooting some dope to lose weight- or the thoughts of him- that sadistic bastard-- while buying the kind that you pedal-her heart was broken-
the woman from the smoke shop rolled out and yelled'you look like gertrude stein'
she thought- 'is it the lack of white sugar?"
coyotes are back
the office had a sloppy 'last supper' kind of grunge- like the oldest of souls were hanging around- she wondered-
the shrink wanted to do EMDR- said she was traumatized- she said yeah sure
it is so broken- all the pieces floating near by- like feelers- each little energetic conversion presents- re-birth- at a rapid expansion rate--they want to do nuerological nerve exploration- nope she said
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: outline

Post by dadio » May 24th, 2013, 8:49 am

Told it well 8)

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