She was blonde, in case you were wondering...

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creativesoul
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Re: She was blonde, in case you were wondering...

Post by creativesoul » May 23rd, 2014, 9:16 pm

so beautifully writtn- complimenti- grazie a mile- vero-BRAVO
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: She was blonde, in case you were wondering...

Post by goldenmyst » June 9th, 2014, 8:22 pm

A dark child of the night. You put into words here abyss of tears. Your portrait of this woman is filled with the desolation of the city and her lonely drifting through urban streets. Your pen served you well here in this poetic masterpiece.

John

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