burn baby burn

On-going spontaneous Word Jams.
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stilltrucking
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burn baby burn

Post by stilltrucking » March 31st, 2005, 2:53 pm

A pain in the butt
Narcotic narcissus my pity my crime
Seduction of words
As if
The truth could be hid from myself
It ain’t how I feel,
I just look that way.


my ego is eating me alive,
to vain to survive
Narcotic narcissus my pity my crime
Seduction of words
As if
The truth could be hid from myself
It ain’t how I feel,
I just look that way.
exquisite elegant
self loathing
better then feeling nothing
a nihilistic corpse
art justifies all
I am not responsible for my words
Just a kick in the head
To remember
Who I am
Why I live
Something to contribute
A bit of honey to the hive
Carry on

carriage returns an illterate form of punctuation

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WIREMAN
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Post by WIREMAN » March 31st, 2005, 3:31 pm

wagon train......
keep them doggies rollin' ST...............

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mousey1
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Post by mousey1 » March 31st, 2005, 8:18 pm

still, I like this write

You do got some beautiful words in you

:)

I'll take carriage returns over punktuation anyday
punktuation is a scourge of modern civilization
:roll:
And no one ever said
I had to make sense :roll:
.period


However
I do make sense
when I say
this is good
and
thanks for the read
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by stilltrucking » April 1st, 2005, 5:40 am

oh shit two replies
mousey`1 you are killing me :lol:
the scurge of civilization
atila the hon
becomes a republicon
wagon train in space
sargent king of the royal canadian mounted poets says
mush

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