Let's combine our notes – Smooth transitions

On-going spontaneous Word Jams.
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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » April 15th, 2007, 12:36 am

me too
its bliss
I mangled the bill collins poem pretty bad
Itt is called Writting In THe Afterlife
I had heard about the journey to the other side ....
but how could any one have guesed
that soon as we arrived...
we would be asked to describe this place....

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Post by WIREMAN » April 15th, 2007, 10:24 am

transition jam
Billy Collins
my new friend
Steve the buddhist
poet here says I
have to check him out
time for a search
transitions, D u r a punster
& just where is the beef?
Susan Marie, love the rhythm
u bring to this cyber waystation
cyber tappin at the coffee house
on a sunday morn, place where
i'm never alone........
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by Doreen Peri » April 16th, 2007, 1:36 pm

stilltrucking said
you are one funny person
is that your story
really?
or did I read it wrong
umm.. no, it's just sumthin i made up
came right outa my punny brain
glad to give ya a giggle
TY
:)

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Post by Susan Marie » April 17th, 2007, 12:02 am

a tip
ta tap
wire
snap

i like the
wordplay

like a
blue
jay

trillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll the

strut n stride

a jackdaw
hides
what's really inside
like a layered cake
chocolate baked
royal straight

a lady in wait
of

wait
of a
lying in wait
of a

BOOM!

forgot my helmet man
what a fuckin' shame
busted brain
gray matter on the high
way
super
buzz
brain
pan
dead
beat
street
meat
i
see

(Thanks Wireman I love it in here and have been to Frederick, I adore it for the same reasons you do, I live in the city! I felt LOUD there. )

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Post by stilltrucking » April 17th, 2007, 6:15 am

Where do all these words come from
how could there be enough room in any ones skull to hold all these words



no music
no poetry
just words

words roll northward to attack the capital city
"Po-tee-weet"

And we all are the word made flesh
we were born for the word
before the begining
after the silence
was the word

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Post by stilltrucking » April 17th, 2007, 5:10 pm

doreen
thanks for the laugh
out loud
truly :!:
i'll even use an emoticon to prove it :lol:

and thanks for the poetry
I think I got some of it
it was very liberating for me to hear it
8)

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Post by WIREMAN » April 17th, 2007, 6:02 pm

Doreen the liberator
with here fast fingers
ponding keys to the
cyber ends............
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by stilltrucking » April 17th, 2007, 6:57 pm

Doreena Doreena
The dreaded heartless bitch of studio eight.
or so she calls herself
but I don't see her that way at all
Last edited by stilltrucking on April 17th, 2007, 7:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by stilltrucking » April 17th, 2007, 7:09 pm

Does that come out like an insult
lordy i hope not
I feel like Don Imus kind of

I like this website a lot
Heartless Bitches Pretty heavy satire but most of them sound like they really do like us. They are just in revolt against the way men are running things. I can't blame them.

It is all good
its ying and yang
trying to find some balance
in this man's world
power should flow
between a man and a woman
like water being poored
from one vessel to another
Mangled quote from memory

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Post by stilltrucking » April 17th, 2007, 7:22 pm

cyber end
like the last lonely cyber cafe
where the eternaly broken hearted come
to feed their cyber addiction to the grind

one more cup off coffee
before I slow
down
and stop

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Post by stilltrucking » April 17th, 2007, 7:30 pm

the last lonely cyber cafe
where the last lonely poet
sits and types his blues away

for the transitionaly broken hearted
either transitions are smooth
or sudden and unexepected
as summer storms on the Potomac

I just want to note them in passing

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