june nights

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panta rhei
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Post by panta rhei » June 24th, 2008, 4:36 pm

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Post by the mingo » June 25th, 2008, 8:56 am

ok...I'm standing on a thick carpet of mottled moss with maiden hair ferns growing all around and...and...I've taken all my clothes off...it's june...now what?...no, really...it took me awhile to sort myself out on your piece here...I tried word after word & sentence after sentence but nothing seemed to fit all that is going on here and a simple statement of 'feeling" is inadequate too...so i came back here this morning to try again - there is a strange & surprising blend of the truly erotic & truly pornographic here, I found it unique and holy somehow in a way I cannot explain - the spirit of it is simultaneously in-your-face & powerfully elusive...see?,it has made me verbose...ok...I'm standing on a thick carpet of mottled moss with maiden hair ferns growing all around and...and...I've taken all my clothes off...now what?...no, really...it's june...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by judih » June 25th, 2008, 9:10 am

when images morph from ether
hot humidity of breeze and brook
a drop of sweat splashes my arm
and an owl swishes overhead
june night caresses my steaming skin
dark voices tickle my ears
barefoot communion
soundless strumming of road
i remember the shooting stars
in junes of past
quickening of chlorophyll scent
my heart beats in eucalyptus time

oh panta rhei, is there anyone else who can pull the images from the air like you do? steve, keep your clothes off & enjoy the moss

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Post by WIREMAN » June 26th, 2008, 12:16 am

jammin june nights
u 2 are my main posse
have ur words to susrtain wired mi
do re fa sa to do

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Post by panta rhei » June 30th, 2008, 11:51 am

images pulled from air and steam
stolen from one long june night dream
plucked like fruit from from night
luscious, bite for bite
trickling, seeping, full of gleam
softly dripping into the stream
of something becoming wide
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Post by mousey1 » July 5th, 2008, 12:07 pm

As beautiful as a June night
I quietly listen
standing naked and glistening
I throb to the tune.

Croon it baby
to the moon
and all the starlights listening.

Stupendous beauty
fits snugly
this Junebug night
and firefly flight of
poetess serendipity.

I loved it.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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