river waves, sun and me

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Whitebird Sings
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river waves, sun and me

Post by Whitebird Sings » August 28th, 2010, 4:02 pm

the river
the river flows
the river flows by me

the waves
the river waves
the river waves at me

the sun
the river waves and bounces the sun
the river waves bounce the sun in my eyes

the river
the river waves
the river waves bouncing the sun
flow by me
wave at me
bounce in my eyes

mmmmmmm... the river, the waves, the sun and me

all that's missing is you.

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Re: river waves, sun and me

Post by SadLuckDame » August 28th, 2010, 8:40 pm

Very sweet and the subtle, nice voice, WB.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: river waves, sun and me

Post by judih » August 28th, 2010, 9:14 pm

between the ions
nestled safely on routes of promise
float sweet surprises

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