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burn baby burn

Posted: March 31st, 2005, 2:53 pm
by stilltrucking
A pain in the butt
Narcotic narcissus my pity my crime
Seduction of words
As if
The truth could be hid from myself
It ain’t how I feel,
I just look that way.


my ego is eating me alive,
to vain to survive
Narcotic narcissus my pity my crime
Seduction of words
As if
The truth could be hid from myself
It ain’t how I feel,
I just look that way.
exquisite elegant
self loathing
better then feeling nothing
a nihilistic corpse
art justifies all
I am not responsible for my words
Just a kick in the head
To remember
Who I am
Why I live
Something to contribute
A bit of honey to the hive
Carry on

carriage returns an illterate form of punctuation

Posted: March 31st, 2005, 3:31 pm
by WIREMAN
wagon train......
keep them doggies rollin' ST...............

Posted: March 31st, 2005, 8:18 pm
by mousey1
still, I like this write

You do got some beautiful words in you

:)

I'll take carriage returns over punktuation anyday
punktuation is a scourge of modern civilization
:roll:
And no one ever said
I had to make sense :roll:
.period


However
I do make sense
when I say
this is good
and
thanks for the read

Posted: April 1st, 2005, 5:40 am
by stilltrucking
oh shit two replies
mousey`1 you are killing me :lol:
the scurge of civilization
atila the hon
becomes a republicon
wagon train in space
sargent king of the royal canadian mounted poets says
mush