the beauty overwhelms

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the beauty overwhelms

Post by sonofthesun » March 17th, 2022, 4:05 am

it is so simple
as air into the lungs
try not to do wrong
There is no empty space

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Re: the beauty overwhelms

Post by judih » March 17th, 2022, 5:59 am

sonofthesun wrote:
March 17th, 2022, 4:05 am
it is so simple
as air into the lungs
try not to do wrong
perhaps this is the one for the haiku forum?

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Re: the beauty overwhelms

Post by sonofthesun » March 24th, 2022, 1:21 am

it is all haiku
let us all one make it so
There is no empty space

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Re: the beauty overwhelms

Post by sonofthesun » March 24th, 2022, 1:22 am

pure as the morning
There is no empty space

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