4 lines then or less you do four lines or less

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sonofthesun
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4 lines then or less you do four lines or less

Post by sonofthesun » March 19th, 2024, 12:19 am

Only rule is 4 lines or less. From previous, or just how you feel in the moment. Let us share

First day of another day
9teenth of March
It’s spring, winter is dead
Cold, but the day speaks longer
There is no empty space

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Re: 4 lines then or less you do four lines or less

Post by winddance » March 19th, 2024, 10:26 am

torture chamber for me
picks and knives
white knuckles strain
dentist chair
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than teach 10,000 stars how not to dance.
e e cummings

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Re: 4 lines then or less you do four lines or less

Post by saw » March 19th, 2024, 11:02 am

the marathon man
cries out for oil of cloves
but the little shop of horrors
lends a comic twist
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: 4 lines then or less you do four lines or less

Post by sonofthesun » March 24th, 2024, 2:12 am

The beauty of meandering
Doesn’t always work
But the beauty of the next
Always contains magic
There is no empty space

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