once upon a time

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~K
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once upon a time

Post by ~K » December 2nd, 2006, 4:04 pm

it felt right
to cry
to let go of all
her disappointments

large & small

all
in
all

they would not
tilt the balance

she said
if I could
I would
remember

lightly
changing hours
where we stood
up against
the naked
substance

with nothing but our
tinfoil Armour
we would
banish all her demons
to the fringes

where they might
fade
into


a happy ending

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Post by WIREMAN » December 2nd, 2006, 9:01 pm

Further till there was no end,
now she sits wondering if she
said the one wrong word.......
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by stilltrucking » December 2nd, 2006, 10:35 pm

wrong words

waiting
forever
love

If I had know you were going to leave
I would have lied to you
and said
it is not too late for love

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Post by ~K » February 18th, 2007, 8:51 am

Happiness

Is

what it is

come on
let's
go
explore
beyond...

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hmmm

Post by ~K » February 20th, 2007, 11:59 am

Can I
begin

to let
you go

No

& where does
this leave us

nowhere
worth
all this

& still I raise
my pen
in your defense
& I wait
much to long
to tell you
this is all
I ever
hoped for

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2007, 3:01 pm

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Last edited by stilltrucking on February 20th, 2007, 3:23 pm, edited 8 times in total.

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Post by ~K » February 20th, 2007, 3:07 pm

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2007, 8:18 pm

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 20th, 2007, 8:29 pm

....

(this is getting deep)

....

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 20th, 2007, 8:31 pm

once upon a time, i ...
and then ...
and ... but after ...
i'm not ...
any more

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2007, 8:44 pm

if wireman was right when he said
"and three people on a GO is bliss"
four must be...

I will settle for happiness and
"an attraction sans agenda" - Hester Prynne

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Post by stilltrucking » February 20th, 2007, 10:23 pm

Isuppose as blissed as I get these days is an open text box
once upon a time takes me down some dark times
you know I think about that son of bitch that named me sue
and I think that my father gave me a precious gift

I finally figured out how to live with fear
I don't know why this beautiful GO of ~k took me down some dark alley
Abstroint once told me that where I look for wisdom is telling.

Not as deep as it seems Doreen

I back posted my ...
to kim after she posted her ... to me
the resto of it the ...---... is morse code for S O S.

>>>>>>>>submit




...

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 21st, 2007, 12:08 am

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 21st, 2007, 12:19 am

i don't understand it, i submit.
why bother trying, i admit.
dot dot dot?
what the heck?
what what what?
life's one helluva treck, brutha.
i could have chosen anutha verbiage
but this is what i chose.
why?
damn.
who the fuck knows?

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Post by stilltrucking » February 21st, 2007, 2:27 am

Its a GO
never a no GO

just keeps on going

Doreen said:
i could have chosen anutha verbiage
Yep you said it; poor word choice. (That sentence seemed to cry out for a semicolon, but whatta I know?)

I should have said edited instead of back posted
I edited my post after ~k had posted her reply.

dang me they ought to take a rope and hang me..

It feels like april down here
Kind of an Easter feeling
I heard a mourning dove call this morning
It must be spring.


just a GO
gotta Go

Go go go

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