the impossible got more so

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
User avatar
revolutionrabbit
Posts: 729
Joined: March 29th, 2009, 8:55 pm
Contact:

the impossible got more so

Post by revolutionrabbit » July 2nd, 2009, 3:06 am

looking for a new way to say no-thing
looking for nothing to say not thing, again
looking for a new way to say the old way
for language to do what it once did akin

speak the impossible nothing it said
in the first moments it stammered
out what sounded mostly like a baby
already held the music of each new cry

i would be a Beaucleric
count the rhythms in names for light
i would hear the call of the birds
that fly through all the words
that were coming into being
as the winged ones fell into flight

i would hear the awakening memory
of those whom once set great store by
the key locals the universe and things once held
would already know and allow for the unraveling
that would turn around once staked earthly position
marked by stone, wind and bone, now by gale poem

User avatar
hester_prynne
Posts: 2363
Joined: June 26th, 2006, 12:35 am
Location: Seattle, Washington
Contact:

Post by hester_prynne » July 3rd, 2009, 2:46 am

"speak the impossible nothing it said"
I really dig that line.....
You've come close here
Transparent in that there are many different ways of reading it.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

User avatar
revolutionrabbit
Posts: 729
Joined: March 29th, 2009, 8:55 pm
Contact:

Post by revolutionrabbit » July 3rd, 2009, 5:58 am

coming close, closer
how to say, nothing
and really say, nothing in that only nothing can say

it would be transparent, in its difference

User avatar
Arcadia
Posts: 7964
Joined: August 22nd, 2004, 6:20 pm
Location: Rosario

Post by Arcadia » July 3rd, 2009, 2:13 pm

i would hear the call of the birds
that fly through all the words


I liked the image! :)

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest