carolina wren

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keithalanhamilton
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carolina wren

Post by keithalanhamilton » August 7th, 2009, 7:27 pm

it hit the patio tent cover
landing about two feet away
on the wrought iron plant hanger
spunky little guy acting schizoid
cackling like I intruded on him
teakettle, teakettle, teakettle
cheery, cheery, cheery
proudly cocking his tail as to say
kiss off, you don’t bother me
then flying off to harass another
a rusty brown bird a lot like him
we call them, carolina wren

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Nazz
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Post by Nazz » August 27th, 2009, 5:58 pm

forgot to mention how much I liked this one.

"teakettle teakettle teakettle, cheery cheery cheery"..
I can picture the little guy shaking it off.

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Post by hester_prynne » August 27th, 2009, 9:55 pm

Sweet and cheery cheery cheery!
Nice one
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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