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Post by Doreen Peri » December 6th, 2009, 12:36 am

Tables.

You can put bottles and plates
and plants on them, you can even dance
on them. You can pile up papers on them,
serve some sugar wafers on them,
even have tea, if it's meant to be,
take your guitar out of it's case,
lie it on the tabletop, chase away
the cat that jumped up, you can
even put on jars and coffee cups.

Some tables are round, some are square,
some are circular, and some dare to be
oval, some are wood, some are glass,
some are decorated for the upper class,
some tables are ulitarian in the corner
of a room, well, they all are in fact for a
purpose.

Tables can have colorful cloths on top,
or cigarette burns, or knots in the oak.
Might be an interesting series. No joke.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 6th, 2009, 3:12 am

Sounds like poetry to me
I enjoyed listening to it.

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"she's waiting on tables
waiting for the tables to turn"

nothing to do with anything
just a couple of lines from a song I heard so long ago about a waitress
and brought back to mind by your poem

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Post by Doreen Peri » December 6th, 2009, 1:57 pm

Thanks Jack. I'm painting tables. Not the tables themselves, but paintings of tables. Hah! Thanks for the idea... might put a waitress in one of them. ;)

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Post by mnaz » December 6th, 2009, 2:10 pm

I love them. (I could use another one).

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Post by Arcadia » December 6th, 2009, 7:51 pm

:)

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Post by Doreen Peri » December 6th, 2009, 9:34 pm

:)

The ones I'm painted are lopsided. Like my thoughts.

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Post by saw » December 10th, 2009, 12:38 am

could be a good series as you say....with the right tables of content...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by hester_prynne » December 11th, 2009, 1:05 am

Shakespeare said, "I drink to the joy of the whole table!"
I dig this poem.
H
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by mb » December 11th, 2009, 1:10 pm

interesting tableau

:D

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Post by goldenmyst » December 22nd, 2009, 11:53 pm

I sold my table. Now I use a homemade computer desk my late grandfather made to dine on. It has sentimental value. In the spirit of your poem, whoever said a table has to be of a certain form as long as its big enough to set a plate on? I dine alone and have not complaints.

John

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