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saw
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Post by saw » December 10th, 2009, 12:42 am

never had much
no line or nothing
like mason and dixon
no commission to explore nuthin'
no queen in my pocket
no stake money
to be fabulous

not that notoriety
alone
would make me giggle
sleep better
smile more often,
I'm just sayin'
it concurred to me today
as I considered left marks

I ain't got no line
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » December 10th, 2009, 4:23 am

no line is good. boundaries-- mixed reviews at best.

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Terri
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Post by Terri » December 12th, 2009, 2:31 am

no queen in my pocket
no stake money
to be fabulous
nice, I like the "no line" idea

maybe you're lucky? tiger wood must've had a good line, plus stake money...

saw
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Post by saw » December 12th, 2009, 10:01 pm

thanx mnaz, perhaps you are right

and Terri, how are you ?........you know you don't need the line if you have the money.....the "beautiful" people fall all over you......and Tiger couldn't say no........do you know the story of the football player Steve Mc Nair ?......shot in the head by some young chick he was cheating with.........that's the problem with money, things seem to blow up in your face a lot........the temptations , the seductions.....maybe I will revel in the fact, I have no line......it's pretty safe

nice to talk to you again, Ms. Terri
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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