the haiku of day

[sweetwater]

<center>i wonder about
slipping into a dreamscape
feeling silent thoughts

in a cloud of rain
falling from the morning sky
touching the water

with my hands reaching
upward into the cool air
hoping it will last

eternally light
in the cadence of a song
goes on forever</center>

[Barry]

I watched Bicentennial Man today, a film written by Chris Columbus, of all people, from a story by Isaac Asimov, on THIS. It was about an immortal being who chose to die, if you get that.
http://www.google.com/search?client=fir ... gle+Search
I have seen the movie before, but it never fails to change my life, not unlike your poem.

Peace,
Barry

[sweetwater]

never saw that movie
maybe i should
i'll have a look for it
sounds interesting

thanks for the comment

[Doreen Peri]

These haiku are lovely!

[sweetwater]

<center>thanks D</center>