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Lucy!
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Wound

Post by Lucy! » February 15th, 2005, 2:35 am

It happened
Scarred me
Recently,
months later
I revisited the wound in my soul
I tried to heal it with your loving
And ultimate truth
But it didn't happen
Scarred me
So that I have another wound
Much deeper than the first


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Re: Wound

Post by dadio » January 27th, 2011, 12:16 pm

I thought this an impressive poem.
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Re: Wound

Post by joel » January 27th, 2011, 2:58 pm

Fighter's steppin' into the ring again, huh? Keep throwing poetic punches. Defend your face. Guard your guts. Spill the blood that gets you out safely--yours or your opponent's; spill it with verses of your strength and hope and life and love.

Sometime when my wife and I come down to the city, maybe we could meet for lunch...I'd love to sit in the arena and watch you fight in real time with real words. Prayers and support!
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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