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joel
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we'd

Post by joel » October 6th, 2010, 1:59 pm

We’d always been the best indeed—
we’d always had the laughs we’d need;
we’d always dug
each other’s drug—
again, indeed, I need that We’d.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: we'd

Post by saw » October 7th, 2010, 9:24 am

kinda of ogden nashy or shel silversteinish......pretty cool.....
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Re: we'd

Post by mindbum » October 7th, 2010, 2:22 pm

mmm. fun sounds, sire. bravo.
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Re: we'd

Post by .Lucy. » October 12th, 2010, 4:03 pm

Indeed, we knew
it was just us two
who'd need to run
when the moment was done.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Re: we'd

Post by judih » October 12th, 2010, 11:35 pm

agree, agree
very cool
and lucy's offering too (l)

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Re: we'd

Post by happytrails » October 27th, 2010, 10:09 pm

Joel. Genius!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: we'd

Post by mnaz » October 28th, 2010, 2:45 am

yes, a need for the we'd. how true. good stuff.

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Re: we'd

Post by joel » October 29th, 2010, 11:35 am

I’m crack ing up—the air’s been still;
I’ll crack the window from the sill
and let the out
be in no doubt
to crack a grin of living will
and smack the face of grace, until
the out comes in
to crack again
my stony heart, then staid and ill,
with healthy thanks to warm my chill.


thanks all for your kind reads. we'd be lost without kindness.
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Re: we'd

Post by happytrails » October 30th, 2010, 7:10 pm

Joel, the more I read of your stuff, the more I realize that you are much more than just a pretty face.

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Re: we'd

Post by dadio » December 17th, 2010, 3:38 am

Fine poem.

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