Happy Song

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happytrails
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Happy Song

Post by happytrails » October 26th, 2010, 11:02 pm

Someone write me a happy song
I'm feeling so very sad.
I'd like one that I can sing along
So I can stop feeling so bad.
All my thoughts are black and brown
And making me feel blue.
Lately I'm wearing a weary frown
So I am asking for help from you.
Won't you write something happy?
Give me this one small gift.
Write something silly and sappy.
Give my heart a lift.

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judih
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Re: Happy Song

Post by judih » October 26th, 2010, 11:43 pm

music box
with your favourite tune
in an unexpected place

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joel
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Re: Happy Song

Post by joel » October 27th, 2010, 10:30 am

I thought I might attempt to pray
but hadn’t learned the proper way;
I saw a roach
below reproach
and broached a topic it might say:

“I’m on my knees when still I stand
and sole survive on wobbly land
and silently
I seem to be
in need of only friendship’s hand.

“So this is what I have to share:
my life is base and bust and bare
and full enough
without the stuff
for which so many others care.

“Forgive me if I say no grace;
I’ve got no voice within my face.
And pardon too
my thanks are few
and I’ve no hand a cross to trace.

“But I’m content to happy be,
content with life instinctively,
and – God of bliss –
my prayer is this:
to simply live as simple me.”

And then I fell to full approach
the rumblings of this mumbling roach
to haply pray;
it went away,
my happy stance that happened coach.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: Happy Song

Post by stilltrucking » October 27th, 2010, 11:16 am

My Blue Happiness
on those days
that loom like custard's last stand
even when entangled in blue and brown
Something is going to always know
I am a thing called "alive"
and that is a miracle
the most precious gift I never did ask for
but always longed for
yes even on one of those days
I am grateful

It always feels like Fat's Domino singing to me

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Re: Happy Song

Post by happytrails » October 27th, 2010, 9:31 pm

Thanks you two. That was nicely done. Much appreciated.

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