don't buy what he's selling

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joel
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don't buy what he's selling

Post by joel » January 20th, 2011, 11:28 am

When Mother finds my stash and comprehends
it’s much much more than I would smoke alone,
I won’t be panicked – second-guess it – when
I lie to her, assuring her I’ve shared
it with my friends, because I love my ma
and trust I’ve known her worries well enough
to comprehend those shames she fears the most:
she’d rather bear a friendly dope-fiend host
to all the neighborhood than birth the rough
reality that – honest as the law –
her son’s been selling weed in gardens cared
for by the Joneses and the Smiths. But then
again, Ma, won’t it seem at odds a lonely
kid like me’d have had that many friends?
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: don't buy what he's selling

Post by dadio » January 20th, 2011, 3:30 pm

Fine poem, Joel.

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Re: don't buy what he's selling

Post by WIREMAN » January 20th, 2011, 9:25 pm

no one could steer me right bit mama tried.......she never did find my stash though.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: don't buy what he's selling

Post by justwalt » January 20th, 2011, 9:34 pm

I feel... dizzy
many is a word

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Re: don't buy what he's selling

Post by Night Writer » January 21st, 2011, 12:50 am

What a beautiful write.

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Re: don't buy what he's selling

Post by Hollweg » January 22nd, 2011, 11:14 pm

Lonely but not unbefriended. Well-attended but not too close.

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Re: don't buy what he's selling

Post by hester_prynne » January 22nd, 2011, 11:21 pm

Go on...tell her the truth!
Love this!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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