Here is the second draft of River of Souls
it still isn't finished yet but this is where it is so far
River of Souls
This version is executed by Lrod and Robert Shelton
River of Souls -- different version
- Lightning Rod
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Re: River of Souls -- different version
LR, good music, for sure. I had some trouble understanding the lyrics. I’m sure that being aurally challenged doesn’t help.
I did hear the instruments and the voice. Consequently, I heard the Moody Blues, which j. referenced.
I also heard Neil Young, albeit he would have made the lyrics even more difficult to understand. Your range seems to be similar to his.
Songs played and sung in minor keys are, indeed, haunting. Add to that the idea of a “river of souls” and this piece is a supersized haunt.
The music’s good, as I stated, but I’d like to be able to read the lyrics while the song’s playing.
To friendship,
Michael
I did hear the instruments and the voice. Consequently, I heard the Moody Blues, which j. referenced.
I also heard Neil Young, albeit he would have made the lyrics even more difficult to understand. Your range seems to be similar to his.
Songs played and sung in minor keys are, indeed, haunting. Add to that the idea of a “river of souls” and this piece is a supersized haunt.
The music’s good, as I stated, but I’d like to be able to read the lyrics while the song’s playing.
To friendship,
Michael
Re: River of Souls -- different version
Down By The River
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A river of souls
courses around us each day,
tugging and tugging.
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A river of souls
courses around us each day,
tugging and tugging.
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Re: River of Souls -- different version
i like the title, and i want more- but i am a bit deaf, can you sign? lol
love your work!
love your work!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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