My girl

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rite
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My girl

Post by rite » February 21st, 2011, 11:07 pm

Something as simple as gas escaping
Brings the singing sound of her laughter
Makes me realize we are all human
How can she find gas funny?
Well, she does.
Makes me want to kiss her sweet lips
One more time while I still breathe
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dadio
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Re: My girl

Post by dadio » February 22nd, 2011, 5:55 am

This brings us to the essence of why we love I guess. Finely drawn and worded poem. 8)
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